Tuesday, 24 May 2016

entry eight: i'll keep it brief

Keeping it Short and Sharp


Literally. Sharp. Tracey Sharp. Writer extraordinaire. Gave me some good feedback on my latest draft:

  • What's Rose's purpose? Does she know about Max and Keith? How much does she notice? If she's oblivious, is there a remark she can make about how they're acting? If she knows, would that remark be with malicious intent, or out of fear, to try and catch Keith out?
  • Flesh out Rose and Max's relationship earlier in the play.
  • Joanna/Max scene is unrealistic. If this happened in real life, how would a mother react when her daughter tells her that her rapist is sitting in the next room? Put this into the play.
  • Does Keith recognise Max? How does he handle this? What happens if he doesn't recognise her?
  • When do each of the characters come to a realisation about Max/Keith? Do they?


Also:

*I've decided to change the name of my blog. 'elephant daydreams: the making of' just isn't relevant anymore. I hope to come back to it one day, but for now we welcome in 'happy families: the making of'. What a genius title. A little weird, very nondescript; just how I like it *

entry seven: this is an update



Update on Things: 2

I need to post more often. That much is clear. Even if it's just little things, little updates and the like, rather than holding off for one big post and forgetting half of the things that have happened in the meantime (I have a horrific memory.) So. A quick recap:





  • No luck with a director
  • Found a designer and technician
  • Found a SM
  • Sending off Basement application Wednesday  25th May
  • Boosted!
  • Actor's Equity
  • Costume, Props, and Set
  • Breakdown of costs
  • Shoot w Sacha
  • Venue
Director: Lauren and I have a couple in mind, but specifically Jacque Drew. I have contacted her and am currently waiting for a reply as to when she is available to meet for a coffee.

Casting: Lauren is meeting with Amanda today, more to come. Haven't found a 'Keith' yet, but a couple of people in mind for that. More of a goal for next week, once all the forms have been handed in, and the time pressure is off.

Designer/Technician: I caught a wild Marshall Bull! Marshall-Bull-the-Designer/Model by day, Bambi-the-Technician/Operator-at-the-Basement by night. A wonderful human, and an incredibly talented techie. I also asked Bambi to come onboard as designer when, after listening to me freak out about how-in-the-dang-heck-could-I-fit-the-set-I-want-into-the-theatre-I-want-at-a-nominal-cost, in one sentence he solved all of my problems, thanks to his culmination of knowledge from his different fields. Now that we have Bambi, hopefully the upcoming process of production will be as laid-back and flawless as he looks here:



Stage Manager: A bunch of my closest friends all flat together, and the partner of one of them, Sophie, is our new State Manager! Sophie started her own business straight out of high school, and it's taken off! I believe it's an engineering/building something, however, Soph was heavily involved in (all aspects of) the arts until a couple of years ago, and is excited to become a sleep-deprived, more-coffee-in-my-body-than-blood human again. Otherwise known as a creative. One of the most hard working, intelligent, and kind people I know. 


(Our wonderful SM and our darling designer/techie, circa 2015. I may be slightly bias, but aren't these two the best looking people you've ever dang seen?)

Basement Application: One word, four letters - SENT! *is torn between patting self on the back/freaking out*

Boosted: I sent in an application last week, and it got approved! I'm meeting with one of the reps today, and I'll post more on that, after our coffee/plan session. My main focus for this is to a) draw up a rough budget for how much the show will cost- how much needs to go into advertising, how much for costume, props, set, cast, crew, production, labour, just-in-case etc etc. and b) find either a designer to draw up a rough poster for the show, or get a confirmed cast and book an appointment with Sasha Stejko (a.k.a incredible photographer).

Actor's Equity: Still haven't joined Actor's Equity. I'm thinking of emailing them regarding the price for a minor/school student, because the price I found on the website didn't marry up with the price two of the representatives gave me, when I spoke with them one night at the Basement. More to come on this.

Costume, Props, Set: Costume should be easy to find. It'd be great if I can pull some strings and get access to the costume departments at First Scene or ATC, potentially even ASHS... However, where possible, I don't want the actors using their own clothes, to avoid any potential damages. But if, with funding, I gave myself a budget of $20-50pp, I'm sure I can find some wonderful things. Op shop queen speaking here. The biggest issue will probably be Keith's shirt, as wine will be spilt on it every night. As actual wine won't be used, I'll need to find a substitute that won't stain, or if it doesn't come out, back-up shirts. Other than that, all the show needs are casual clothes, things the actors would wear in everyday life. Props is something I haven't thought too much about just yet, as there's still a lot of work to go before this will become a priority. However, in a week or two, I'll read through the latest draft of my script and write up a list of all the props mentioned, with their corresponding acts/scenes. On to set. Most of this Lauren and I can provide from our homes, we've decided. If we are stumped, it'll be easy to put out a PSA on social media, and if all else fails, op shops are the ticket. There are lots of good/affordable furniture op shops around the North Shore especially, places like Browns Bay and Northcote in particular. Not a worry of mine at this point in time.

Breakdown of costs: A couple of options here. Boosted offer a full consultation for working with us to complete a breakdown of the costs, and so does the Basement. Because this is so new to me, I'm sure I'd miss small things that are glaringly obvious to anyone who has been through this process before. Once we get a breakdown, we can effectively apply for funding, with aforementioned breakdown attached, which will help our case greatly. More to follow.

Photoshoot with Sasha: Sasha Stejko is a phenomenal photographer; we've worked together a couple of time in the past, both for commercial shoots for shows and personal headshots. She has a wealth of information and connections, and I'm sure will be able to help us source a location, if her screens/studio won't work. I have an idea in mind of what I'd like, and I'll flick her an email today regarding costs.

Venue: CHASE CHASE CHASE! Follow up on booking the Dojo. Important. I won't know for sure when our season will be until we a) get selected at the Basement and b) have a cast we can contact regarding their availability. But ASAP, booking a rehearsal space is crucial. 

Well, that's my list. Below are some of the documents I've put together in the last week, with a little description of each.



(50 word blurb for the Basement submission pitch. Note my little numbers scribbled everywhere; there was a specific limit!)




(To do list from Wednesday last week. All of these have been done except for contacting helplines and applying for funding. Lauren and I decided we wanted to wait until we have confirmation before approaching helplines etc.)




(My terrible first draft of a cost breakdown, that turned into why the Basement is such an amazing space for up-and-coming performers, or those who are tight on money. It then progressed into who we wanted to contact for support/sponsorship, and a little note about having a feedback box on the piano as you exit the theatre after the show.)




(Another terrible example of my first draft. Kind of how the stage will look. I will fix this horrific draw-up, and post a new and improved in the next post.)



Until then,
Spinach (who desperately needs sleep)


Wednesday, 4 May 2016

entry six: updates, funding, and other such strange things

Update on Things

Yesterday was a highly productive day for me, in regards to my Impact Project. I met with Lauren to debrief, as it's been three weeks since we last met up. We talked about so many things (this is a bigger project than we thought!), like finding a director, a producer, two more actors, a rehearsal space, how to pitch the show, to whom we should pitch the show, the ideal season for running the show, sourcing funding, and working on a breakdown of costs associated with this show. In more depth:



  • Revisit latest draft of script:
    • Anais Nin running joke correction
    • Edit 2.1 (still need to add in fluff re. Keith, currently a highlighted gap in script)
    • What other content is missing?
    • Do all scenes flow naturally into one another?
    • How can I ensure the ball doesn't drop between scenes, or between split scenes?
    • Does the play feel heavily weighted towards partner scenes?
    • Do there need to be more group/solo moments?
  • Directors to approach with a request to direct or coach:
    • Michael Hurst
    • Laurel Devenie
    • Jacque Drew/Jeff Szusterman (husband/wife)
  • Producers to approach with a request to produce or coach:
    • Sam Snedden (Basement Theatre)
    • Lynne Cardy (Auckland Theatre Company)
    • Brie Hill (Bits and Pieces Ensemble)
    • Robin Kelly/Cherie Moore (husband/wife) (Last Tapes Theatre Company)
  • Finding a rehearsal space (potential venues):
    • Dojo - owned by Silo but on Q/Basement Theatre property. Easy to rehearse with set/costumes/props and then transfer across carpark to theatre. I am very familiar with the space. In Central City. $15 per day, regardless of hours used.
    • TAPAC - The Auckland Performing Arts Company. 10 minute drive/20 minute bus from Central City. Pt. Chevalier based. Probably more expensive than the other venues. Regularly busy.
    • ATC - Auckland Theatre Company. 5 minute drive/15 minute bus from Central City. Dominion rd based. Good, large space. In excellent shape. Working bathrooms/kitchen. Hard to book as is often used for only Mainbill shows.
    • Te Pou - New Lynn based. Unsure if there are rehearsal spaces available.
    • Albany Senior High School. Albany based. 25 minute drive/1hr bus to Central City. Free. Limited hours available. No space for set/costumes/props.
    • LIFE Church - Top of Mt. Eden rd. In Central City. Low cost, if any. Lauren's work. Limited space available.
    • The Vault - Q Theatre rehearsal venue. In Central City. Next to Basement Theatre. Waiting for reply re cost. Storage space, but limited.
  • Pitching the show (who we want on-board with this/advisors/potential funding):
    • Lynne Cardy (Auckland Theatre Company)
    • Whetu Silver (Auckland Theatre Company, Youth Arts Coordinater)
    • Amanda Billing (Actor, potential cast member)
    • Robin Kelly (Last Tapes Theatre Company)
    • Cherie Moore (Last Tapes Theatre Company, actor, potential cast member)
    • Brie Hill (Bits and Pieces Ensemble)
  • Season:
    • September - November 2016
  • People to contact to review final draft of script:
    • Sam Snedden (Basement Theatre)
    • Sam Brooks (Playwright)
    • Cherie Moore (Last Tapes Theatre Company, Vocal teacher, actor, potential cast member)
    • Tracey Sharp (Playwright)
    • Calum Gittins (Actor)
  • Amanda Billing
    • Has a copy of script
    • Potential cast member (!!!!!!!)
    • Lauren to follow up, after her filming ends
  • Actors we have in mind for Keith Robinson:
    • Calum Gittins - RADA trained. 30yo. Slightly young for the role, but as it is theatre, age can be easily shifted.
    • Nick Brown - HOF Westlake Boys Theatre. 40's. Good age for role. Very busy with teaching.
  • Actors we have in mind for Joanna Fenley:
    • Amanda Billing - 30's. Good age for role. Expensive (but well worth it if we can get her on board!)
    • Cherie Moore - 20's. Young for role, but would play it very well. Older than Lauren, so could pass.
    • Laurel Devenie - 20's. Probably too young for the role. About the same age as Lauren. A possibility.
  • Finding:
    • Creative New Zealand - A couple of options (Creative Communities Scheme (mostly under $2,000) and Quick Response Grant (up to $7,500). Will need to look into this further, and submit applications once cast and crew are more solidified.
    • Wallace Arts Trust  - Currently looking into this now. Will update later on.
    • Actors Equity - Free advertising and promotion if all cast are Equity members. Plus, a free cake on opening night.
    • Auckland Theatre Company - Will need to investigate. Unsure if funding is given to new artists. Watch this space.
  • Contacting Agencies:
    • Lauren and I to contact our respective agencies
    • Hopefully some promotion on social media accounts?
    • Can put us in touch with actors if there is an open casting call?
    • I am meeting with Karen Kay next week to discuss all this
  • Joining Actors Equity:
    • Ensure all cast members are with Equity.

Whelp. My brain is fried, so I'll leave it at that for now. Will update this post later tonight, after work ^__^

Spinach out.


Tuesday, 29 March 2016

entry five: an excerpt

ACT I

1.1 (MAX, ROSE: clean up)

Lights up. MAX and ROSE are in the living room. MAX (25) is cleaning up the room for Thanksgiving dinner while ROSE (19) is sitting on the dining table, reading Anais Nin.

MAX
Can you help?

ROSE
You seem to be doing just fine.

MAX
I'm trying to sort this shit out before Mum- Fuck, I swear nothing has moved since we were last here. What the- Why is there a-

ROSE
Is that a dictaphone? Jesus, I didn't know Mum wrote.

MAX presses 'play' and their mother, (JOANNA)'s voice fills the room.

JOANNA
His eyes, emerald green with gold flecks, pierce my soul, his lips, soft and warm, hidden under a scruff of beard... And when he took my hand in his, I felt butterflies for the first time, a pulsating, throbbing, flushed-

ROSE
Oh, Jesus-

MAX
That's enough of that.

The dictaphone is silenced. ROSE hops down off the table and saunters around MAX, reading aloud from her book-

ROSE
"And in his eyes he had the look of the cat who inspires a desire to caress but loves no one, who never feels he must respond to the impulses he arouses."

Laughing-

MAX
Get out! You're disgusting!

ROSE
It's Anais Nin, you uncultured peasant. Besides, you're just jealous that Mum's getting more.

MAX
I'm happy waiting for the right guy.

ROSE
Your fairytale prince.

MAX
Exactly.

A silence.

MAX (cont'd)
I wonder what he's like. Mum's new boyfriend.

ROSE
Probably a dick.

MAX
Probably.

ROSE
How long?

MAX
What?

ROSE
How long do you reckon this one'll last?

MAX
With Mum's track record? Who knows. She seems pretty serious about him though. Writing poetry and everything.

ROSE

I hope he's not one of those wierdos, like an accordion player, or a china doll collector, or something.

MAX
It's good to have you home again Rose.

ROSE
Missed you. It's weird coming home, do you feel that?

MAX
Yeah. Strange, huh? Nothing's really changed, but like, so much has. You know?

ROSE
Mm.

MAX
Anyway. I should clear some of this junk away before the gross lovebirds arrive. Can I put it in your room?

ROSE
     Sure.


MAX picks up a box and leaves the room. ROSE heads over to the old record player, and begins to flick through. She finds one, and puts it on to play. Some French something, with the song 'Bang Bang' playing later.

End scene.


~


Until then,

Spinach x

entry four: cold turkey/happy families - character list

Character List and Descriptions

Max Fenley (25):

Max is the older sister of Rose, and the daughter of Joanna. When Max was born, Joanna was only 17, so Max has never particularly felt the mother-daughter connection between the two of them, and resents Joanna a bit for this. Max disapproves of her mother’s lifestyle, and in doing so, has adopted quite the reverse; Max believes in true love and isn’t afraid to wait in order to find ‘the one.’ This is also partly caused by the abuse she suffered while studying at Constance Boarding School. Max is a very strong woman, a dedicated worker, and a loyal friend. She has always got along with her younger sister, Rose, and the two of them (led by Max), would get up to mischief when they were younger. A bright kid, Max always had an abundance of ideas for pranks to pull on her Mum’s boyfriends, and thrived in the chaos it caused. She never really grew out of that. Max is currently working as the bar manager for a local restaurant in the town, and loves her job.

Rose Fenley (19):

Rose is the younger sister of Max, and the daughter of Joanna. Like her sister, Rose also studied at Constance boarding school, however, she left at the end of her second-to-last year to live in Europe. While Rose loves her family, and isn’t a ill-meaning person, she has a habit of doing irrational things that can often get her in trouble. Examples of these include, but not limited to: running away when she feels out of her depth, and drinking to excess in order to avoid prevalent issues. Rose Fenley is a huge fan of author Anais Nin, and finds comfort in the familiarity and safety of books. Other favourites include The Neverending Story, The Magician’s Nephew, Juniper’s Game, The Seagull, and The Wise Man’s Fear. While Rose was living in France, she met artist Céline, and the two became very close. Céline’s decision to leave Rose is what prompted her move back to home.

Joanna Fenley (42):

Joanna is the mother of Max and Rose, and the girlfriend of Keith. Joanna works as a part-time HR consultant for an aromatherapy chain, but prefers her Sunday job working in the local market, where she makes and sells bits-and-bobs (like paintings, children’s stories, pottery, and her own literary works, the latter of which are rather unsuccessful.) Joanna is an incredibly strong person, but hugely flawed, and her strength often goes unnoticed. She made a lot of mistakes when she was younger, but always made the best out of any situation, and turned her life around to accommodate Max, and Rose a few years later. Loves her children more than anything, but is always anxious that she didn’t do enough, or wasn’t a good mother to them. This isn’t true at all.

Keith Robinson (45):


Keith Robinson is the boyfriend of Joanna Fenley, and works in marketing for a trust fund bank. His co-worker, Amelia, dragged him along to an open-mic night writing class, where he saw Joanna read a piece of her (terrible) writing. He bought her a drink after the show, and the two got talking. As a boy, Keith always preferred his own company to that of others, and would pass the time reading C.S Lewis and playing War with his toys. In High School, he was ostracized for his quirks and temper, which placed a strain on his friendships, and the potential for any relationships with girls. As a result of this, Keith can struggle to express how he feels about people, especially when he cares about them. Keith does care for Joanna, but when he sees Max, it throws him, and he begins to slip back into old habits.


Until then,

Spinach x